It's a great start, but the proportions are pretty far off. The crotch looks really large, the boots should be a little higher and thicker than the legs, the calves and thighs need more shape, she has shoulder pads (but the arms and hands are about right), the head should be larger, forehead should take up more space (move the eyes, nose, mouth area down a little bit), hair needs to be more 3D in the front and cover part of her face and one of her eyes, and the breasts look too large on the side (they are about the right size, but should be moving forward, not side to side). But the general geometry looks there, you just have to tweak it a bit.
